Argument writing

This is the start of my argument writing

Shark vs Polar bear

Sharks and polar bears, are two completely different animals that  live in two different
environments
and wouldn't normally fight each other but if you were to put both large animals into
jello who would
win and why?

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Polar bears can breath underwater for two whole minutes

Although the polar bears are  large animals, it is really their bite force that makes them
so strong
at 1200 pounds per square inch. This amazing animal's enormous size adds to its incredible
strength,
in fact it can kill basically any animal with just one swipe of its paw.Polar bears need ice to
survive
because they use the ice as platforms to reach their prey.Normally male polar bears weigh up
to 450kg and a female normally weighs up to 150kg . The biggest polar bear known weighs
at 1,002 kg
and stands at an incredible  

3.39 m. If you were to put a polar bear in jello the polar bear would win because it
has the advantage
of holding its breath for two minutes unlike the shark they need water or their gills can not inhale
anything.

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Sharks can only breathe if they are moving around 

   If a shark was put in jello it would die in the first few minutes because they need the water
to breathe.
Sharks can live in cold water for a very long time unlike polar bears who can not stay
in warm weather.
Most sharks are intermediate in size, about the same size as people, 5-7 feet long.
Half of the 350 shark
species are under 39 inches

(1m long)  The sharks sharp teeth can cut through almost anything so if it had the chance
it would be
able to bite through the polar bears furry coat like it was a pillow.

If you were to pull a shark by it tail it would die.

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