Writing

This term we have been doing one hundred word stories theses are mine...

I didn’t know they could fly…

Katie and I are going to the pets store , mum finally thinks that we are responsible
which means that my sister and I get to get a puppy .I am so excited I said to Katie I
want the cutest puppy ever.As we walked in the the pets store a puppy golden fur and brown
eyes caught my sisters eyes,  as we walked up to the puppy it flew up into the air and knocked
over all of the shelves.The shop owner yelled what I didn’t know they could fly!

As it flew towards us…  

As it flew towards us I could see its large beautiful wings that  smoothly glided throughout the air.
I wondered what it was so I quickly went to the home to do some research about the wonder creature
as all the images popped up one caught my I it was called a dragle which is half dragon and half eagle ,
know human has ever seen one , I raced back to see if the large  creature was still there but I was too
late the dragle at already set of for a new adventure.

At the end of my one hundred word stories I fell like I am growing in areas like expanding idea and punctuation.