Persuasive writing
Introduction:
Did you know that since this pandemic less people have been on the roads which means
less pollution.I think that people should keep these habits that we have used in this pandemic and
make them a every day thing.I think that buses should be used more and people should be only using
cars or motorcycles when need , not when they want to.
less pollution.I think that people should keep these habits that we have used in this pandemic and
make them a every day thing.I think that buses should be used more and people should be only using
cars or motorcycles when need , not when they want to.
This is a photo before and after just since the pandemic has started
Big difference right but if people go back to there old habits our planet slowly go back to what it was
Why people should …
I think people should bike walk or bus more because it helps our earth.
You will probably say no but helping the earth would be one thing
that would benefit everyone.You would also get to see through our waters and look at the great sights
we once had.
You will probably say no but helping the earth would be one thing
that would benefit everyone.You would also get to see through our waters and look at the great sights
we once had.
What I want from this…
I want people to think about what they are doing to our planet and try and change there life style
/ the way they transport them self to places
/ the way they transport them self to places
Hi Kirsten,
ReplyDeletewell done with this blog post. It really gets the message out. You have written very good paragraphs. Well done
Isla
Hey Kirsten, I totally agree with you, I was really surpised how quickly the pollution went away. Just shows how quickly we could fix the problem. Also I've really enjoyed biking and walking with less cars around. The pictures you've included really illustrate the main point of your writing.
ReplyDeleteGreat powerful topic you’ve chosen Kirsten.
ReplyDeleteIt’s mind blowing isn’t it? Such a difference in such a short time. That’s something I’ve really noticed people walking and riding their bikes. I totally agree hopefully people will take notice and make as much effort as they can.
Sometimes it takes things like this to give us all a shake up and stop and think. We’re all rushing around doing things and we’re missing the important things in life. I think this has given us time to sit and reflect on life and what’s important.
Looking forward to your next blog.
Ali
Hi Kirsten,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your report on the difference less traffic has made. I really like that you have included evidence as I had heard about it but not actually seen evidence until now. I am going to have a look online and see what else I can find. Can you suggest any websites for me? Great work.