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Wednesday, May 27, 2020

My peter bland poem

This week my literacy group has been doing poems and this is my peter bland remake poem.


With a microphone plugged into the earth we can hear crumbling soil and bubbling lava.
we can hear birds chirping with the whistling trees swaying up through the dirt.

when we take our earphones off we can hear the earths silence listening back.

1 comment:

  1. Ooo, spooky “the earths silence listening back...” sends a shiver down my spine Kirsten. Thanks for that!!
    What else might you hear that lives or grows underground if you could plug earphones in?

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