This is my story for visual prompts
If I was to write about this visual prompt again I would make it more exciting :)
I look up at the night sky admiring the full moon.I decide to count the glimmering stars.”1,2,3…”
I start to yawn as I hear a echoing howl ,my body jumps in fear.I try to be as quiet as a
mouse trying to get in-side without attracting attention to myself.Once I make it in-side
I race through the cottage locking all the doors.I start to calm down and peer out the
small window in the bedroom.I look out-side but I can't see anything.The howls are getting
louder and I start to panic in fear again hiding under the large knitted blanket by grandma
made me.The howling stops and I come out from under the blanket…
mouse trying to get in-side without attracting attention to myself.Once I make it in-side
I race through the cottage locking all the doors.I start to calm down and peer out the
small window in the bedroom.I look out-side but I can't see anything.The howls are getting
louder and I start to panic in fear again hiding under the large knitted blanket by grandma
made me.The howling stops and I come out from under the blanket…
I turn my head and yawn as I sit up noticing I am still on the grass out-side the cottage.
”What! how am I out-side”.I say to my-self trying to think of an explanation.
”What! how am I out-side”.I say to my-self trying to think of an explanation.
Where did the wolf go and the howling I cant have imagined all that I think to my-self curiously.
Surely it wasn't a dream,it can't have been…
Do you guys have any suggestions that I can change about my story?
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