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Thursday, August 20, 2020

visual prompts

This is my favorite visual prompt.
The boy rolls out of his blankets as he sees something starting to shimmer underneath him.
The room suddenly lights up as the carpet is brought to life.
The boy's eyes glow with excitement as the carpet lifts its-self into the air.
The dog spins around in the sparkles that float off the magic carpet.
The boy picks his dog up and they fly around the room all night.
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 20, 2020 at 1:39 PM

    hi kirsten can you fix your blog post but other than that good blog post

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    1. AnonymousAugust 20, 2020 at 1:46 PM

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    2. AnonymousAugust 20, 2020 at 1:47 PM

      Hi Cayden
      Thank you for noticing I will change that now.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 20, 2020 at 1:49 PM

    Hi Kirsten
    I love your story it has a nice theme and theme to it.
    Great job

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  3. AnonymousAugust 20, 2020 at 1:53 PM

    Ello Kirsten,
    I love this piece of writing, but maybe next time don't start every sentence with the word 'the'
    But I still love it!
    From
    Bluebell

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  4. AnonymousAugust 20, 2020 at 1:58 PM

    Hi Bluebell
    Thanks :)
    I will keep the sentence starts in kind for next time.

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  5. AnonymousAugust 20, 2020 at 1:58 PM

    Hi Kirsten.
    I like the way you described how the boys eyes glow with excitement.
    Well done

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